Mrs Barrett,An english speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours in a day next summer.Write a letter to mirs Barrett --suggest how could you help her in her work. --say why you like to do this job. --when you will and not be will avaible. write at least 150 words.Dont need to write the adress.

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Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Ranjit Kumar, I am writing in regards to the part-time job which you have given advertisement in the local newspaper "The samaj" in the

last

week Saturday edition.At ,present I am a third-year student at Utkala university and studying History in English literature.I I came to know from the advertisement that you need a person who can help you with your research on the ancient civilisation of Rarh .I think that being a history student I have a wide range of knowledge of the local culture, the history of the area, the background of the local tribal people like and t dislike, and their festival celebrations.I can contribute and help in editing, and typing your work.Not only that I can

also

bring you to the local area and translate their things and which will help your research.Sometimes at the ,

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weekend I can do your shopping,and cooking and Keep your house tidy. I am interested in

this

job because it will save me time and transport costs as I live in the same area where you live.It will take only 10 minutes to walk from my place . My classes start in the afternoon at 3PM. So it may suit both of us. My summer vacation is starting in the month of April.I am available for

this

job from the 10th of April.If you feel I am fit

according to

your requirement ,please call me on my mobile phone.my phone no is 0473736. Looking forward to hearing a positive response. Yours Faithfully Ranjit

Submitted by saomyakrsna on Mon Mar 27 2023

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9 paragraphs

258 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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