The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
The bar
grapf
give a percentage of teachers comparing the gender gap Correct your spelling
graph
according to
several types of British academic institution in 2010. On the whole, female staffs
accounted for Fix the agreement mistake
staff
vast
majority Add an article
the vast
in
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of
schools
for young children while
male educators expanded their ration
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ratio
in
those for teenagers.
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to
To begin
with, it is noticeable that almost all of workers
in Add an article
the workers
nursery
and primary school were women in 2010, whose percentage reflected well above 90%. Add an article
the nursery
a nursery
However
, in following educational steps such
as secontary
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secondary
schools
and tertiary schools
, roughly
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the roughly
same
amount of male and female teachers Correct article usage
the same
were
employed, Change the verb form
was
although
there was still a minor outnumbered figure by
5% for women in secondary Change preposition
of
schools
.
On the other hand
, the trend which could be seen previously that female dominated
educators’ Add a hyphen
female-dominated
poputation
was reversed in private training institutions, which represented about 5% higher for male employees than female those. Correct your spelling
population
Likewise
, universities’ emplotment
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employment
condition
recorded more outstanding Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
figure
compared to proceeding data that three Fix the agreement mistake
figures
quaters
for men.Correct your spelling
quarters
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