The pie chart illustrates several destinations of anthropology alumni from one university after they finished their bachelor degree and the table gives information on the payment of the anthropology graduates after working for 5 years.

The pie chart illustrates several destinations of anthropology alumni from one university after they finished their bachelor degree and the table gives information on the payment of the anthropology graduates after working for 5 years.
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The pie chart illustrates several destinations of anthropology alumni from one university after they finished their bachelor's degree and the table gives information on the pay of the anthropology
graduates
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after working for 5 years.
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, it can be seen that anthropology
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mostly have full-time work.
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, a minority of them do part-time and post-study at the same time. Meanwhile from the table, freelance consultants and government sectors are the jobs that have higher pay. Around half of
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graduates
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do full-time work
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15% of them prefer to choose part-time work.
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, 5% of them decide to continue their education and do part-time at the same time.
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salary, freelance consultants and government sectors are the higher earning which is 50% of people who employ in government sectors for 5 years generate income of more than 100.000
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and 40% of them as freelance consultants have salaries between 50,000-99,999
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. Only 5 % of
graduates
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have a salary below 50,000
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. Working in private companies
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have a variety of income which is 35% of them earning money 50,000-74,999
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.
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, the percentage of
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after finishing study does not have a job reaching 12%.
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, 8% of
graduates
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choose to continue their education. Unfortunately, 8% of them un-known neither working nor unemployed.
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  • pie chart
  • bachelor's degree
  • anthropology alumni
  • employment sectors
  • salary ranges
  • academic roles
  • field research
  • public sector
  • non-profit organizations
  • private sector jobs
  • continuing education
  • job market trends
  • financial prospects
  • career progression
  • economic context
  • geographic location
  • cost of living
  • salary increases
  • experience
  • earning potential
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