The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the monthly change in the gold wholesale rate ,in Dubai ,over the whole year 2002.
Speaking generally , the visual indication that the percentage of sales experienced a significant fluctuation during the year ,with a slight decrease by end of the period .
To start with , in January ,the percentage of sales of gold in Dubai was almost 200 trillion Dirham and increased slightly to 225 total in Feb .
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,at the beginning of March ,there was a sharp rise in the rate of wholesale reaching a peak of 350 trillion by end of the first quarter, Interestingly, the wholesale ratio experienced a dramatic drop after the next four months to touch the lowest point at around 120 total in July . Linking Words
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the amount appeared to overcome in August and grew to just over 200 million ,Linking Words
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, in September the ratio declined again to reach nearly the lowest point at about 125 million . Linking Words
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quarter started with a considerable climb at 180 thousand in October and increased slightly to settle at 200 trillion approximately by the end of the year.Linking Words
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