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These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Undeniably, in the modernised world, there is a drastic change in the preferences of people as compared to bygone days. It is a widely acknowledged fact that a significant proportion of people tend to live in foreign for
work
 but few individuals think that
this
 is fruitful for their
children
whereas
 others opine differently that it makes their way of life more complicated.
This
 essay will discuss both viewpoints
as well as
 my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs prior to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin
 with, more families migrate overseas for
work
. There are main two reasons. The first of forest mostly families think that advantages for their
children
. They get a better education.
Children
are improved
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 their studies and get more knowledge about study or culture. They explore new cultures when they moved to their country and live in another country. They meet new people.
Children
 make their friends because they get
every
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new
one
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ones
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. They communicate with other ones.
Children
 learned new things about their culture and learned more about entertainment facilities
whereas
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 they improve their communication skills.
On the other hand
, there are two main reasons associated why living in foreign makes is more difficult.
Firstly
,
children
 face to face communication is more difficult and language variation. They do not understand the language and don't feel comfortable.
Moreover
, they used to with their old lifestyle but,
then
children
 get more responsibilities and
work
 or study. They feel very uncomfortable. They do
work
 9-10 hours. They get stressed with these hectic routines. Mostly they live alone without any helping hand.
Hence
, due above mentioned reasons, I am favour in
latter
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 statement.
To conclude
, I want to say that more families go overseas for their
work
 purpose
then
 they face difficulties
instead
 of benefits.
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