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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear John, I am writing
this
 letter with regard to your article published in the Times of India, which claims to have similar kind of town centre all over the country. I am an habitant in the most popular
city
 of India, Gurgaon, for the past 15 years. To help in changing your thought, I would like to provide some details about my town. The centre of the
city
 is very crowded as you mentioned and traffic is overwhelming too like in the other places in the country.
Whereas
 living in
this
 area is time-consuming and you are absolutely correct, it is because of the heavy traffic jams.
Although
, there is a world here of spending a good amount of time in the heart of the
city
, known as CyberHub.
This
 area is popular for its restaurants and pub hopping. To reiterate,
this
 landmark is totally different in my town as compared to the other ones. Anyway, I would like to offer you a guided tour of my
city
. Be my guest, whenever you are travelling to the northern part of India. I would love to show you around the
city
. Yours Faithfully, Sagar Dhawan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing in response to
  • the article published in your newspaper
  • I would like to express my disagreement with
  • the claim made in the article that
  • I agree with some points raised in the article
  • However, I believe that there are significant differences in my town center
  • One notable difference is
  • Another way in which my town center stands out is
  • Furthermore,
  • In addition to
  • I would be more than happy to offer
  • a guided tour of my town
  • to the writer of the article
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