The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs show the changes in
ownership
of electrical appliances in each household and how much time a country spent on housework per week from 1920 to 2019.
In the past 100-year period, the property of refrigerator
in families rose dramatically in the past 100-year period, reaching 100% in 1980 and remaining unchanged. Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
While
the number of hours of housework each week saw a fall from 50 hours in 1920 to only about 10 hours a week in 2019.
Ownership
of electrical appliances such
as washing machine
had increased to 70% by 1960 before decreasing to just above 60% in 1980 and grew marginally compared to the other two domestic appliances in the next 40 years. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
In contrast
, holding
of vacuum cleaners saw a steady upward trend. Families who owned a vacuum cleaner was only 30% in 1920, less than the washing Correct article usage
the holding
machine
that 40% of households had, however
, it continued going up and overtaking that of the washing machine
in 1960, reaching 100% ownership
in 2000 and kept constant in the next 2 decades.
Overall
, every household had a refrigerator and vacuum cleaner from 2000 in the particular country, while
ownership
of washing machine
fluctuated and rose slightly in the century. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
On the other hand
, there were corresponding drops in time people spent on housework.Submitted by xiangyiwan5 on
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