You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The bar displays the percentage of the suggested amount of fruit and vegetable eaten by men, women and children during 2002, 2006 and 2010 in the UK. The data clearly indicates that women consumed the highest percentage of fruits and vegetables

while

children consumed the least amount of them. In 2002, the percentage of men eating perishables

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22% and showed significant growth in 2002 with 26%.

However

, it declined again in 2010, reaching 24%. Meanwhile, only a quarter of women were consuming fruits and vegetables in 2002. 2006 witnessed a sharp increase in consumption of up to 32%, which decreased

further

in 2010, making it 26%

On the other hand

, children consumed the least (11%) in 2002. In 2006 and 2010, they managed to reach 18% and 16%, respectively, which showed a clear growth in the consumption of fruits and vegetables.

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0Word repetition
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9 paragraphs

142 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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