Some people believe that one of the best way to solve environment problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and vehicles. Agree or disagree

There is no doubt these days that, the environmental issues in the world are increasing day by day. Others believe the best method to decline

environment

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pollution

is to rise the cost of

fuel

.

While

,

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others think

this

way is not effective in some regions .The question can

be

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this

method assist to reduce the

pollution

issues

in

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our planet ¿. In

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essay,

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am going to explain both views and draw my conclusion. In terms of

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the price of

fuel

for

transport

is one of the best solutions to decrease the ratio of car

pollution

. The main reason to support

this

claim is,

people

will lead to used other

transport

instead

of cars to preserve their money. To illustrate

people

will prefer utility

transport

with no

fuel

and low prices

such

as

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electric cars or bicycles.

in other words

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will disappear with time because of these healthy alternatives. In another hand,

this

solution is not adaptable in some countries.

For instance

,

a

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in a

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country which has

hot

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a hot

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climate and low economy,

people

don’t have

ability

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the ability

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to walk or use

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a bicycle

the bicycle

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bicycle

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bicycles

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.

Also

the economy in the country cant export electric cars . In conclusion, higher cost of

fuel

may motivate

people

to use healthy

transport

however

this

way is not appropriate in some circumstances. I believe that

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there are many ways to prevent

pollution

in the world by increasing awareness among

people

and stimulating them to use healthy options to decrease the environmental problems