You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: - explain your situation - describe your problems - tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and I've been appointed as the

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Manager for your organization. As per my joining letter, my expected start date is next week, but I'm afraid I won't be able to make it. The thought has been causing me some concern.

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serving my notice period in my current office, I am

due to

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complete it by mid-next week,

however

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, a particular

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that exclusively falls under my purview remains incomplete. As the sole point of contact between the

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and its client, I am obligated to devote my time and attention to its successful completion before my departure from the company. I would request you to please extend my joining date to 2 weeks from now so that I can complete my

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running

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successfully and join your office with much more positive feedback. Thank you in advance, looking forward to your positive response. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

shikha_dhingraMon Mar 27 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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