The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010
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The bar chart compares four different nations in terms of the volume of
coffee
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produced between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
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, the
coffee
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production of Colombia declined
while
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other countries went up over a span of 20 years.
In addition
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, Brazil always ranked first and recorded the fastest growth. Starting in 1990, Brazil accounted for around 0.7
million
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tonnes
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of
coffee
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and
then
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experienced a slight increase to 1
million
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tonnes
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of
coffee
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in 1995 before reached to over 1.8
million
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tonnes
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in 2010. At the beginning of the period, the growth of
coffee
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production in Indonesia and Vietnam made up 0.2 and around 0.1
million
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tonnes
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respectively.
Then
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it was a gradual rise to 0.4 and roughly 0.3 respectively
at the end
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of the period.
In contrast
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, the volume of
coffee
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produced in Colombia was a very different trend. In 1990, Colombia was at 0.6
million
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tonnes
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of
coffee
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and
then
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had a moderate drop of about 0.3
at the end
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of the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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