The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California, and the rest of the world.
The three pie charts show/reveal/ demonstrate the difference in the amount of
water
consumed in three identical/ dissimilar sectors (residential Use synonyms
sector
, industry and Use synonyms
agriculture
) in Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
Country, Use synonyms
California
and the world as a whole.
The initial impression from the chart is = The most striking/ outstanding /notable feature is in Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
and Use synonyms
California
, [Use synonyms
water
use for households [accounts for = represents] the highest proportion = the highest proportion of Use synonyms
water
consumption in households is clearly evident]. In marked contrast, Use synonyms
agriculture
consumes the vast majority of the Use synonyms
water
used in the world = The vast majority of Use synonyms
water
utilized worldwide is used for Use synonyms
agriculture
, which contrasts markedly/ vividly.
In Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
and Use synonyms
California
, Use synonyms
water
usage for households takes up around 60 % and 39%, respectively. The amount of Use synonyms
water
used for Use synonyms
this
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sector
worldwide is only 8%. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at Use synonyms
water
consumption/ In striking contrast, another distinguishing feature is Use synonyms
water
consumption in Use synonyms
agriculture
. Use synonyms
This
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sector
utilizes/ gets through around 69% of global Use synonyms
water
use, Use synonyms
while
/ Linking Words
whereas
the figures for Linking Words
San
Use synonyms
Diego
and Use synonyms
California
are significantly/ dramatically lower, at only 17% and 28%.
Turning to the remaining Use synonyms
sector
, we can see that the Use synonyms
water
usage for the industrial Use synonyms
sector
in Use synonyms
San
Use synonyms
Diego
and the world [have equal proportion / is proportionally similar to] 23% whilst/ Use synonyms
whereas
the figure for Linking Words
California
is slightly minimally higher, at 33%Use synonyms
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