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In some countries more and more local shops are closing down because so many people now shop online. what proplems might this cause ? what is the best way to deal with this problems ?

#countries #shops #people #shop #proplems
There is no doubt that these days , online shopping has become popular
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, which leads to
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 many local
shopss
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shops
 in some regions . The question is , what are the reasons of lock the local
shops
 in some countries
? .
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 In
this
 essay , I am going to explain the causes of
this
 issue and draw my conclusion . In terms of many
shops
have
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 closed recently , the primary one is that most
people
 prefer to pay from online
shopes
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shoppes
shops
 rather than local
shops
 because of the price and
others factor
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.To
illustratre
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illustrate
, one of
most
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 attractive
featuers
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features
with
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 online shopping is
more
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cheaper than local shopping .
Also
 , the quality of the purchases
are
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 more
convenint
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convenient
with
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for
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 different
people
 than
other
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in other
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shops
 .
In other
words
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 online shopping is allowed
to
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customers to pay from their comfort zone .
On the other hand
 , during covid
pandemic
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 many
people
 tend to close their own
shops
 because the rent of local stores
are
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is
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 reached
to
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the highest level in 2020
comapred
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compared
 with
last
years
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 which leads to
close
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the close
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many
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of many
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shopse
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shops
 in some areas .
However
 , the prices of clothes in local
shops
 are more
exspenseive
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expensive
 and not
realiable
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reliable
 for most
people
 . With the advancement of technology over the world
the
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customers have
ability
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the ability
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 to pay every
things
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thing
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 from any country just with click a
botton
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button
with
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 a second. In
conclusion
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 we could say that
nowdays
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nowadays
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people
 are enjoying to pay
from
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for
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onlin
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online
 shopping because it
is contain
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alot
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a lot
 of
postive
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positive
featuers
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features
.
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