The chart shows number of students who choose different subjects at university in 2005.
The bar charts presented information about the figures of students that were interested in different subjects called science, mathematics, social sciences,
languages
, humanities, arts, literature, and law in the year 2005.
Overall
, the bar charts compared information about men and women. In addition
, the arts mean subjects for example
art, music and drama. The proportion of women who were interested in social sciences was the highest. In contrast
, the lowest percentage was males who studied languages
.
Firstly
, men there were chosen science more than other subjects and the percentage was 23 per cent. Followed by mathematics was 18 per cent. Languages
were lowest was only two %
Secondly
, women which interested in mathematics are very lowest was four %. Followed by law and arts were five % and six % respectively. Moreover
, languages
were 25 per cent and it was the highest.
To sum up
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