Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Nowadays,
English
is ubiquitous
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almost every
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given its identity as an international
language
. No matter business, academic or academic,
English
is utilised in a
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.
For example
, most
of
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the
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primary schools and high schools are taught in
English
,
not to mention
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universities.
Consequently
, it is often concerned that it will take over the
indispensibility
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indispensability
of local languages as most of the students are having less time
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their mother
toungue
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tongue
. To my opinion, surely
English
is crucial to citizens' lives currently.
However
, the reservation of local languages should be at the top of the agenda. Learning
English
is more
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beneficial
than harmful, one is able to communicate with billions of strangers around the globe,
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understand every page of
fashion
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magazine introducing
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this
month, and
to
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enjoy fabulous TV shoes at dinner time.
As a result
,
English
is taught to kids for a better prospect, even
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the local languages ignored.
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language
is the core
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country, it represents the evolution of a civilization.
For example
, Cantonese can be found
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books published a thousand years ago. It is every
citizens'
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responsibility to keep their local
language
inherited. It could be achieved in various ways.
Firstly
, from the
individuals'
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aspect,
language
reservation has to be started
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domestic education. The core problem of children not
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to speak their local
language
is attributable to the lack of
practising
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environment
. Students talk in
English
at school and get used to the
English
environment
, parent should help their children get through the burden of the strange
environment
by speaking more
local
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language
to them.
Secondly
, on
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social basis, the government could pay more attention
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constructing the
environment
by funding local entertainment and cultural promotion,
such
as supporting local
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singer
singers
for more pop songs,
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exhibitions and activities for promoting the reservation
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from
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local
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language
.
To conclude
,
English
itself is beneficial to citizens'
lifves
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lives
but one should never forget his/her root.
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  • economic opportunities
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