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reasons,problems and solutions for water pollution

#water #pollution
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Nowadays contamination of
water
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 sources become an environmental crisis and it needs immediate attention.The causes , after effects and solution of
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 problem now become
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debatable
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 and
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 essay will discuss briefly the same.
According to
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 recent studies more than 90%of our
water
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 resources are polluted for various reasons.The major cause of
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 contamination is of because
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improper
waste
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 management systems in our country.
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,
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 products from industries and restaurants are not disposed of properly and these harmful materials are directly dumped into our
water
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 resources and may get polluted.
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 to that domestic garbages like kitchen and septic tank trash is not disposing properly and is thrown into the nearby rivers. The main crisis is that our pure drinking
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 sources got polluted and after consuming contaminated
water
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 humans and animals may get serious health issues.
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, people may be affected by
water
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 born diseases like cholera and dysentery by drinking spoiled
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.
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,the creatures living in
water
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 like fish and different types of plants are destroyed by a lack of oxygen in the
water
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 contaminated chemicals and other
waste
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 substances from different sources.
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,the solution can be possible only by making awareness among communities about the importance of protecting our
water
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 resources.There must be certain punishment for the people who are violating the rules and the government should not give permission to start any industry without a proper
waste
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 management system.
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