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How frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants beween 2003 and 2013

#people #usa #food #restaurants #beween
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the percentage
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 of
people
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consumed
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who consumed
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 fast
food
 during
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the
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 decade between 2003 and 2013. One particular point that
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 by the figure is that
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the
percentage
 of
american
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people
 who ate fast
food
 every day or did not eat at all
were
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 always just a low of 5
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 during these times.
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 the consumption of fast
food
 always
had
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fluctuated in
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.But the
percentage
 of
people
 who were interested to eat fast
food
 had some changes between 27%,33% and 27% in 2003,2006 and 2013 respectively.
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,
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percentage
 of
people
 who ate once or twice a month in 2003 was 30% and
then
 it
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marginally decreased to 25% and
then
 again it rose to 33%
in2013
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in 2013
. American
people
 consumed
fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
 a few times a year from 13%
in2003
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in 2003
 had increased to 15% in 2006 and it remained
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until
 2013.
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