The diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Erosion of a headland
The diagrams illustrate how headland
erosion
happens in four steps.
Erosion
starts to destroy the headland from the weakest part of the rock , it starts from a very small area in the place, which is the closest to water
.
In the next stage, the area of destruction becomes quite larger. The destruction is so huge that water
can move through it . It also
can be seen , that the next part of an island start to be damaged by erosion
.
Thirdly
, water
breaks the upper border , which connect
Change the verb form
connects
mainland
with the piece of land , that was Add an article
the mainland
ate
by Wrong verb form
eaten
erosion
.
At the last
stage ,it can be seen that there is approximately nothing left from the separated piece of land and erosion
started to damage other pieces of an island
It can be concluded , that water
slowly but surely devours the mainland using erosion
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