The diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Erosion of a headland

The diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Erosion of a headland
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The diagrams illustrate how headland
erosion
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happens in four steps.
Erosion
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starts to destroy the headland from the weakest part of the rock , it starts from a very small area in the place, which is the closest to
water
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. In the next stage, the area of destruction becomes quite larger. The destruction is so huge that
water
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can move through it . It
also
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can be seen , that the next part of an island start to be damaged by
erosion
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.
Thirdly
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,
water
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breaks the upper border , which
connect
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connects
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mainland
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the mainland
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with the piece of land , that was
ate
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eaten
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by
erosion
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. At the
last
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stage ,it can be seen that there is approximately nothing left from the separated piece of land and
erosion
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started to damage other pieces of an island It can be concluded , that
water
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slowly but surely devours the mainland using
erosion
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words erosion, water with synonyms.
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