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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you are selling • describe the furniture • suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,

#minutes #furniture #friend #date #addresses
Dear Vetri, Hope you are
good
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well
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 Since have been we long time
we
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since we
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 meet each other. I am writing
these
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this
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 regarding
to
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apply
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that I going to move
Chennai
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to Chennai
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 because of my transfer. So, I cannot bring many items with me so decide to sell some
furniture’s
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furnitures
furniture
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. You know that I had recently
buy
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bought
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 that new cabinet with security options for
bedroom
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the bedroom
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. It has a sliding door option with four racks and troves with
some
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apply
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multiple options and can adjust rack height. Most important
things
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thing
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 it has
the
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a
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 digital lock with
sensor
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a sensor
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 that easily can
operated
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be operated
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 by application on your phone. I buy
this
 furniture
on
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for
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 5000 rupees with
1-year
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a 1-year
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 warranty I hope that you have some time to come and see the furniture as I described. Please let me
known
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know
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 the timing and date of
visit
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the visit
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 you
known
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know
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 that I had of unexpected
works
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work
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due to
transfer
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a transfer
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 I need to keep available. Once you see the furniture you will be exited Beast Regards Arun
Submitted by arunramrvs on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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