Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them

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related to them.Meanwhile,some people think we should let our

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have their own choice.But another group think,letting

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select their own favourite

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or clothes may increase

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sense of selfishness in them.I partially agree with both

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essay in detail with some examples. On the one hand,

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have a right to choose their own objects

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an early age is somewhat different from what

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them happy

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of 25 or beyond.

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should let

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have freedom.In

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not only feel independent and

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but they can learn how they can have the best choice in their life.

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always to choose their own things may increase the sense of

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can not distinguish between wrong and right and they may select something that they are not suitable or appropriate for them.

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are interested in eating junk

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or fast

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.If we allow them it would be harmful

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their body and it can lead to obesity or may they choose leisure activity

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dangerous for them.

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have a crucial role in their

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life.observation and monitoring regularly is vital.Parents should learn to them what is the best thing for them and stay back and let them

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be free.