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There are three main stages, beginning with
water
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evaporation, returning to the Earth's surface, and back to the
ocean
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.
It is clear that
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evaporation is the first
stage
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of
this
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process 80% of the
water
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from the
ocean
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returns to the air,
as well as
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the sun heats the steam. The second
stage
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begins with turning into clouds, which is the main
stage
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of the
water
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cycle
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.
However
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, evaporated
water
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becomes a cloud,
whereas
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rain or snow is mainly formed from evaporated clouds. The third
stage
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of the
cycle
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is, depending on which way, rain or snow lingers cycling some of it may fall into lakes and others return to the
ocean
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. Some of
this
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reaches the impervious layer and completes the
cycle
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. Just before entering the
ocean
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, the surface may mix with salt
water
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,and the
cycle
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is completed.
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