You have recently moved to a new neighbourhood and would like to join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, •introduce yourself •say why are you interested in this sports club • ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc.

Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I am interested in joining your sports facility. My name is Harsh Rewari. I was born in India. Recently, I have moved to Canada and I live near Rossland park nearby your
club
. My pin code is 382475. My friend, Raj, is a member of your
club
. I am very much excited to become part of your
club
since he talked about the merits of your
club
. He told me that you have all the updated equipment that I am looking for in the sport I am interested in. He
also
told all the machines are of top-notch quality.
Hence
, all these parameters drew my interest to join your
club
. I would like to ask you what extra facilities you have for old age people.
Also
, do you have any family membership programs? If yes, what is the cost as my parents are
also
excited to join your
club
. I am looking forward to
hear
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from you at the earliest possible. Yours faithfully, Harsh Rewari
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