The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the

number

of

shops

that run out of business and

shops

that

newly

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opened, between 2011 and 2018.

Overall

, both sides experienced significant fluctuations and faced a similar

down ward

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trend. The

number

of

shop

closures have one

enourmous

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enormous

drop

in 2015,

while

the

number

of

shop

openings have two giant and moderate

drop

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throughout these years. The

number

of

shops

that closed

strated

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started

at a higher

position

on the charge, but it ended at

the

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lower

position

in 2018. Starting at approximately 6,500

shops

being closed in 2011, the

number

of closed

shops

slightly

decreasing

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down to around 6,000 and

then

rise up to just over 7,000 within 1 year. The

down ward

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trend started on

year

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2013, there is a slight

drop

before it went down to

the

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lowest

position

at just below 1,000 in 2015,

then

spike up to approximately 5,100. The

number

did not fluctuate much with a small decrement from 2016 to 2017 and ended at just over 5,000 in 2018.

On the other hand

, experienced much greater fluctuation throughout 7 years period, the

number

of

shop

openings started at

relatively

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a relatively

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high

position

at around 8,500.

However

, it

also

faced a similar big decrement in 2012. In 2013, the

number

gradually rise back to the second highest

position

at

aroung

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around

6,000, which is just below that of the

number

of

shop

closures. Even though the

down ward

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trend seems to

stable

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from 2015 to 2017, there is a clear

drop

of

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in

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the

number

from just over 4,000 to approximately 3,000 in 2018.