You have been invited to attend an admissions interview for a prestigious college. Unfortunately, you cannot come at the proposed time due to a previous appointment. Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. In your letter: • Introduce yourself and state your interest in the program • Apologize and offer to come at a different time • Ask how long the interview will be and if you will have to take an exam

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention
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an admissions
interview
which will
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on
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your
college
. I am afraid I will not be able to come to attend it because
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at the same time I have scheduled another admission
interview
to another
college
before. My name is Milav P. Soni and I come from Gandhinagar. I have applied
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Embedded System & VLSI Design Master course
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your
college
a month ago. I was waiting for your response till
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Monday, and
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course
to
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another
college
. I would like to say sorry about my inconvenience to you. Since I have scheduled
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first before your letter, I need to go there. could you please give me one more chance by offering me another date for
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? I
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interested to study in your
college
and I know your
college
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in the country. could you please provide more detailed information about how long
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will go? and am
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need to pass an exam to enter
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round in
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? I would appreciate a reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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