The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from suagr can
The process below displays how
sugar
is produced from Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
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Overall
, the process contains seven steps, Linking Words
such
as farming, crushing, separating and drying.
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To begin
, the first stage is to grow Linking Words
sugar
cane and it takes from 12 to 18 months to become mature. After that, the next stage is to harvest the Use synonyms
sugar
cane either manually or mechanically. The former method is that farmers remove the leaves first and Use synonyms
then
chop down the Linking Words
canes
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while
industrial reapers can cut down the Linking Words
canes
directly.
Once collected, the harvested Use synonyms
canes
are put in a mill to crush the Use synonyms
canes
into the juice, which is later poured into the limestone filter so that any unwanted substance is eliminated. Use synonyms
Next,
the purified juice is heated in the evaporator to make the juice thickens into the syrup. Linking Words
Then
separating from the syrup from the Linking Words
sugar
crystals at high speed by using the centrifuge. Use synonyms
Finally
, the crystals are dried and cooled to get ready for packaging .Linking Words
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