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The process illustrates a reusing system of stormwater for drinking purpose in a town of Australia.

The process illustrates a reusing
system
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 of stormwater for drinking purposes in a town in Australia.
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, there are 5 main stages in total, commencing with
water
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 being collected by a drainage
system
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 and culminating in supplying usable
water
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 for consumption. Starting with gathering and recycling rainwater, a roof and draining
system
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 complement collects
water
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 on a rainy day and
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 pumps it to a large shared pipe
system
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 located underground.
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the gathered
water
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 flows through the public pipe to a
water
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 filter before being transported to a
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 storage tank. Continuing with the treating and delivering stage, the recycled
water
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 flow to another tank through a pipe, where it will be purified. In the next step, recycled
water
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 is added with chemicals in the treatment tank to finish the whole treatment process. After that, the treated
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 is usable and pumped back to households on sunny days to serve as drinking
water
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.

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