Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary ,because students can get so much information through the internet and study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays ,there are enough numbers of people worldwide who think that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn at home thanks to the development of internet access . From my perspective, I disagree with
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is that teachers are important. There is a lot of information about learning materials and students don't know which is valuable for
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. If students go to
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schools they will take
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useful from their teachers' opinion and it is affected their knowledge.
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which is helpful ,worthy,
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are given by teachers.
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it is difficult to find valuable books .
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another reason for opposing
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view is technical trouble . There are inhabitants who stay in the suburb without the use of electricity.
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it is
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situation which residents to learn on the internet.Tutors
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teach pupils to become professionals is important in society. Government should not rely on technology alone for learning so that others people will benefit .
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Individuals
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with each other to build interpersonal skills.
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considering the aforementioned points,it can be inferred that universities
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importantly
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. Tutors are the best information material and technical troubles are the two main reasons I agree with
this
view.
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