Write about the following topic: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Today's world is an era of globalisation where many students and people leave their countries and settle down in other countries for
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future or for higher studies. In order to achieve
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they are bound to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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so that they can communicate with the local people
hassle free
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.In my
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desagree
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disagree
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may cause serious problems,
as well as
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practical problems.
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with, learning a foreign
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helps an individual to know more about the country's culture and tradition which not only
evolve
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a person socially and culturally, it
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helps in communicating without feeling awkward.
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, one of my
friend
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who is working in
canada
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got
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from his company as he was able to bag one of the projects for his company because of his fluency in
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the english
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english
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language
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.
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, learning a foreign
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helps an individual to learn about a country's culture and
tradition
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. It
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helps a person to update a foreign
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in his or her curriculum vitae,which helps to find a good job
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oneself.
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, one of my
colleague
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got selected
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a multinational company because his hold on foreign
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is really good. In conclusion, learning and speaking a foreign
language
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helps a person to communicate with locals freely and learn more about the culture and
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of the respective country. It
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helps an individual to evolve oneself.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social integration
  • language barrier
  • isolation
  • loneliness
  • professional growth
  • miscommunication
  • workplace
  • errors
  • productivity
  • job satisfaction
  • everyday tasks
  • fluency
  • quality of life
  • educational barriers
  • academic performance
  • cultural nuances
  • social norms
  • social faux pas
  • offending locals
  • frustration
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