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Write about the following topic: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#topic #country #language
Today's world is an era of globalisation where many students and people leave their countries and settle down in other countries for
better
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a better
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 future or for higher studies. In order to achieve
this
 they are bound to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 so that they can communicate with the local people
hassle free
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.In my
opinion
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i
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desagree
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disagree
 that
this
 may cause serious problems,
as well as
 practical problems.
To begin
 with, learning a foreign
language
 helps an individual to know more about the country's culture and tradition which not only
evolve
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evolves
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 a person socially and culturally, it
also
 helps in communicating without feeling awkward.
For example
, one of my
friend
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friends
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 who is working in
canada
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Canada
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 got
praises
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praise
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 from his company as he was able to bag one of the projects for his company because of his fluency in
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the english
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english
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language
.
Secondly
, learning a foreign
language
 helps an individual to learn about a country's culture and
tradition
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traditions
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. It
also
 helps a person to update a foreign
language
 in his or her curriculum vitae,which helps to find a good job
for
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oneself.
For example
, one of my
colleague
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 got selected
in
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 a multinational company because his hold on foreign
language
 is really good. In conclusion, learning and speaking a foreign
language
 helps a person to communicate with locals freely and learn more about the culture and
tradition
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traditions
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 of the respective country. It
also
 helps an individual to evolve oneself.
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