The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
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The maps illustrate how Willington town changed over 220 years, in 1780, 1860 and 2000. In general, the town became more residential and a variety of facilities
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constructed at places.
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, hard infostructure was under development in the first 80 years. A
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of farms that used to be in the
center
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halved in their
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and relocated
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northward making a place for a new road
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stretched from the east to the west. The trees
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witnessed a two-times compression, albeit the
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of homes doubled. What is more, a two river
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connecting bridge was built to the west of farms. In 2000, a huge share of improvement was done to the soft
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info structure
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. A couple of schools and 3 stadiums were added to the right-hand
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, and a new road was laid between them and homes. Its
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increased to 500.
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