It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Every person goes through his

life

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with other

people

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. It may seem that almost all individuals have an extended or nuclear family, a lot of

friends

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or one best friend. But our reality can exclude that essential relationship for some reason. We

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might say that it seems weird when children don’t want to have a close relationship with their parents or peers from school. Sometimes the same things can be like reality for one fraction of

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, but other

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don’t attempt that. In my opinion,

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, especially children who have a good family are really lucky, they can grow up in a good atmosphere, explore

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world, and learn from their parents as well.

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friends

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should exist in their

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. Having

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, we find out different aspects of

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, we find out how other

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communicate, study, do their business and other things as well.

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, the idea of accepting new

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in your

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like new teachers

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can exist.

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idea explains that we meet new

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because we go through new steps in our lives and every person gives us something that we need at

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time. It can be new knowledge or some traditional ideas. More likely, I can't agree with the suggestion that a good family can always compensate for all important parts of friendship, even parents who communicate with their children like

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communicate with each other.

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, no matter what age they have, always have some interests or hobbies which they want to share with other

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, a lot of teenagers and adults are not able to discuss them with a family,

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, they still need someone to talk to about them. From my point of view, family plays a vast role in our lives as much as

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. Every person needs to have a good relationship with his family, but

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be capable of having

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and don’t try to compensate for one essential part of

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by others. We just should try to keep balance and be patient before we meet our

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

350 words

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It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Write a letter to a friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing. In your letter – Tell your friend about the party – Ask for the recipe – Explain why you need the recipe from his/her country.

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Some people argue that governments should spend more money on developing bullet and metro rail facilities, while others support the idea of spending money on upgrading current public transport system. discuss both views and give your opinion

An increasing number of professional, such as doctors an teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in develop countries. What problems does this cause? what can be done to deal with this situation?