Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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few people believe the

government

's responsibility is to supply from the financial side healthcare and education. Others think that it is not

them

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business. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and provide my opinions.

To begin

with, it's undeniable that, the

government

should provide health care and education sectors from material and spiritual sites if the sectors

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the

government

's poverty.

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is because, nowadays, in our community, opening a lot of buildings. Many parts of them

becoming

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personal objects. As an example, within two-year , many businessmen held

opening

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ceremony

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at

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different parts of the country, their business areas,

such

as shopping

centers

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, educational zones and many more becoming popular among the population.

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countries

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annual reports about buildings,

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this

time started numerous business ideas to

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money, where

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the majority part of the zones are not under the ministry's possession.

On the other hand

, many people believe that

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authority is not

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for

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them, but it is

firstly

depending on the ownership of the area.

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, it's undeniable that

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a lot of governmental buildings,

such

as hospitals, schools, and society still need the

government

's support from the financial side,

although

there are

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many rich workers. To quote

from

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, anyway without

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governmental rules, our country, and work sectors already become useless, unless

pay

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attention. In conclusion,

in

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spite

of

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the

government

's drawbacks still remained, and I believe that the ministry will change

their

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control structure in the near future. For that, they should approach with clarity and humility

to

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every internal

problems

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.