The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The given line chart illustrates the average
carbon
dioxide emissions
of each person in four different countries produced from
1967 and 2007.
Change preposition
between
Overall
, during the period the carbon
emission in the United Kingdom and Sweden experienced decreases while
Italy and Portugal went up.
Despite a steady decline from 11 to 9 metric tonnes
, emissions
in the UK were higher than in the three countries all the period. Sweden's emissions
first rose from about 9 metric tonnes
in 1967 to a maximum of nearly 10.5 metric tonnes
in 1977. After the increase in carbon
dioxide in Sweden, it experienced a rapid decrease from 10.5 to 7 metric tonnes
and a continued slow decline to 5.5 metric tonnes
to
the end of the time.
Average Change preposition
by
carbon
emissions
that each person in Italy increased between 1967 and 2007. Italy’s carbon
emissions
nearly doubled, starting at just above 4 metric tonnes
in 1967 and ending at nearly 8 metric tonnes
by the finishing year while
Portugal's emissions
in 1967 were nearly 1.5 metric tonnes
. But in 2007, emissions
had reached 5.5 matchings Sweden’s average.Submitted by bkhojiakbar on
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