The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The given line chart illustrates the average
carbon
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dioxide
emissions
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of each person in four different countries produced
from
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between
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1967 and 2007.
Overall
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, during the period the
carbon
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emission in the United Kingdom and Sweden experienced decreases
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Italy and Portugal went up. Despite a steady decline from 11 to 9 metric
tonnes
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,
emissions
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in the UK were higher than in the three countries all the period. Sweden's
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first rose from about 9 metric
tonnes
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in 1967 to a maximum of nearly 10.5 metric
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in 1977. After the increase in
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dioxide in Sweden, it experienced a rapid decrease from 10.5 to 7 metric
tonnes
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and a continued slow decline to 5.5 metric
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the end of the time. Average
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emissions
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that each person in Italy increased between 1967 and 2007. Italy’s
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emissions
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nearly doubled, starting at just above 4 metric
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in 1967 and ending at nearly 8 metric
tonnes
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by the finishing year
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Portugal's
emissions
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in 1967 were nearly 1.5 metric
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. But in 2007,
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had reached 5.5 matchings Sweden’s average.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, emissions, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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