The table below shows the results of a survey of the average number of cars travelling through three suburban roads during working hours in a 10-year pollution monitoring programme. Traffic calming was introduced in Harper Lane at the beginning of 1999
Overall
, Chart
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the Chart
illstruates
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illustrates
average
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an average
the average
number
of cars
traveling
through Change the spelling
travelling
Harper
Lane
, Great York Lane
, Long
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and Long
Lane
started from 1993 to 2002.
Each suburban areas
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area
were
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apply
steadily
increased Correct article usage
a steadily
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
traveling
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travelling
cars
except Harper
Lane
from 1998 to1999
. At that time, Correct your spelling
to 1999
Harper
Lane
's number
of cars
in 1999 dropped down
more than Change preposition
by
one fourth
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one-fourth
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
in
1998. Change preposition
apply
Harper
Lane
was
always Unnecessary verb
apply
least
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the least
cars
passing through area
in Add an article
the area
this
chart. Compare to Harper
Lane
, Long Lane
was the highest number
of cars
went
through for the vehicle Correct pronoun usage
that went
traveling
. Compared to other areas, Great York Way was Change the spelling
travelling
the
medium Correct article usage
a
number
of cars
traveling
through Change the spelling
travelling
roads
.Correct article usage
the roads
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