​​The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a civilized society , children's education has an integral implication in generating a new successful generation . Some assert that the most effective way to boost their sense of

cooperation

is by joining some

team

sports

at school. From my experience, I do not agree with the viewpoint. It is understandable why teenagers can be taught to cooperate through

team

sports

. Perhaps

this

could be an opportunity to improve their communication skills , practice regularly

also

help them to harmoniously connect with their peers .

Moreover

, when they play together , they have to organize some logical tactics which ensure victory for themselves .

However

, strengthening

cooperation

through

team

sports

can alter the player’s attitudes towards being the winner at all costs , even reaching their purposes in an unsavoury method.

Apart from

this

, there have been some notorious situations of players using violence to address conflict with opponents aggressively . The aforementioned counterproductive effects brought by

team

sports

make it seem not to be an optimal solution to help children become more cooperative.

Besides

, there are some alternative ways to enhance children’s

cooperation

without the above disadvantages. One key driving option is that they

also

can get on well with their companions through doing a common assignment or any homework together . Seeing that when they make an effort to do heavy sums , they have to discuss and share ideas to come up with final answers .Another primary option is that the school can organize some outdoor activities , ranging from going camping

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to going sightseeing .

This

not only helps them to be more independent but

also

builds a sense of teamwork when they work together without the pressure to become the winners . These ways might be better than participating in a competitive confrontation.

Finally

, I would opine that parents and schools can educate children with a sense of

cooperation

through many approaches which are superior to

team

sports

. In conclusion ,

although

it is undeniable the importance of sport , people can not neglect some drawbacks of it,

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they

also

can use other ways to boost children’s

cooperation

.