You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write the letter to the course tutor. In your letter: -Describe your situation -Explain why you cannot continue at this time -Say what action you would like to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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in regard to the part-

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course I am taking at your institute. The course is suitable for me and I get to learn so many things because of it.

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, at the same ,

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I am doing a full-

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job and

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why I find it difficult to continue with the course I am enrolled in. I am a software engineer and my job needs full-

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focus.

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, a new project is on the way and I will have to work for more hours specifically in the evening;

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, I may not be able to provide the

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required to complete the study I am enrolled in. It would become hard for me to spare

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in the evening as a lot of meetings are scheduled at

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time

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, I request you consider my situation and allow me to continue to study after a few months. if

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is not possible, I would like to ask you to refund me the amount I paid

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joining the coaching institute. I hope you will consider my situation and do the needful. Yours faithfully, Kishan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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192 words

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