Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more imporant. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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that attending university is the perfect way to start a career
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, others believe that soft skills and capabilities are more important and better seen by companies. Attending university means that once students had finished their studies a certificate is handed to them. In our modern society it is common for employers to choose workers
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their focus on the
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study career,
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having a good degree can result in more
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opportunities. Others think that having a prestigious study career do not
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having the
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job.
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, it is more important to develop abilities by having
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direct experience. Companies are now asking for skills rather than studies, creating work opportunities for people who can not attend universities mostly
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of economic
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. I believe that having a degree
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not prove a
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work capabilities
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it is important to
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have direct experience in the field. Taking everything
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consideration
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can say that future generations are improving constantly, creating more work opportunities and evaluation methods that
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consideration experiences and skills equally as studies.
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