In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Finding out the story of houses and apartments they are living in is becoming more and more trending. New generation young adults want to know

their

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roots and backgrounds of their families through their

house

’s history. One of the ways is to interview elders

such

as their grandparents. There are stories behind every

houses

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house

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, from the main entrance to the

roof top

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balcony. If a

house

has been lived

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more than 1 generation of a family, that place is full of

histories

to share. More and more people are eager to learn about their roots through the building’s

histories

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. Many questions are waiting for answers

such

as when it first constructed, who is the

house

owner, and why

this

partucular

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particular

design. Take my

house

as an example, the building I’m living in had been used as a bunker in world war two and has been renovated uncountable times,

thus

this

means that my ancestors survived

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world war two. Because those are private

accomodations

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accommodations

,doing the research at

national

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library or government website is not the best choice. The best

methos

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method

methods

is to ask people,

whom

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have lived there for more

than

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decades

such

as your grandparents or elder neighbours. By approaching experienced individuals, one can learn about

histories

, which

mostly

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accurate and interesting, of the place they are living in.

For instance

, I learned about my ancestors through my grandmother’s stories. They escaped the

povery

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poverty

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China and moved to Thailand 80 years ago;

Hence

this

house

represents their success.

To sum up

, I believe that many people are curious about their roots and they can find their answers from

histories

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behind those houses.

Hence

, reaching out to your elder family member for help is an efficient way to

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with.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Historical research
Genealogy
Architectural styles
Heritage
Relics
Oral history
Archival records
Museum exhibits
Historical societies
House tours
Renovation projects
Original blueprints
Careful documentation

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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