The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The given diagram depicts those machines and steps involved in the process of how cement is made,
also
it shows how this
product is transformed into concrete to be used in construction means. Overall
, it can be seen that, in both cases, the process is linear, composed of few and
simple steps before use.
In cement production, Correct word choice
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initially
limestone and clay are crushed until it takes a powder form. After that, it is mixed and set over a higher temperature to be heated. Add a comma
,initially
Finally
it is grounded and stored in bags to be sailed.
When it comes to concrete management, several raw materials are used in order to conceive Add a comma
,Finally
the
concrete. Correct article usage
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Firstly
, exactly half of the gravel, a quarter of the sand and a tiny fraction of water and cement are all put together to be mixed into a concrete mixer machine. Once it is done, the machine starts a continuous rotation to make the mix ready for use.Submitted by Nayara on
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