In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
It is almost a universal phenomenon these days that some
people
try to work
harder than their mates. A variety of reasons can explain why this
is the case. In my opinion, I do appreciate these people
who work
hard, however
, whether it is always good to keep working so hard is questionable.
People
work
hard for several possible reasons. First of all, working hard is widely regarded as a virtue in some cultures around the world. In China, for example
, parents feel satisfied when their children are praised by their teachers as diligent students. This
kind of appraisal stays in our subconscious mind and influences our behaviour when we grow up. Secondly
, due to
the limited resources in the job market and the ensuing fierce competition, being hardworking is a way to prove that you are worthy of the position. Furthermore
, working hard can also
be considered a sign of pursuing a desirable future. People
persuade themselves to work
hard in order to offer themselves better life conditions and assure themselves of their ideal lifestyle.
There is no denying that hard work
brings many benefits as it can take one to a higher level and become a better version of oneself. However
, I would understand life as a marathon rather than a dash. Sometimes we need to set a 'speed limit', and in this
case, it means learning to rest. During the rest, we can do introspection and self-reflection knowing exactly which direction we want to go next. Through energy recovery, we gain the power to reboot as well. I once read a saying that the truth of life is hidden in our breath. Normally we breathe at our natural rate, but in an emergency, we can also
increase its frequency to make a reaction. Besides
, hard work
day and night can be exhausting, while
a break can sometimes bring unexpected good fortune.
In short, there are many factors that lead to the prevalence of hard work
today. I would suggest people
learn to be aware of the importance of recovery instead
of working hard on a daily basis.Submitted by xiexue1223 on
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The essay adequately addresses the task question and provides a balanced viewpoint on working hard. Ensure that the reasons for working hard are fully developed and the conclusion succinctly summarizes the main points.
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The essay demonstrates good logical structure with clear progression from introduction to the main body and the conclusion. To improve coherence, link sentences more effectively and ensure that each paragraph is closely linked to the main topic.
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