The maps below show an indutrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future develpoment of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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Map 1 depicts the industrial area of the

town

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called Norbition and map 2 indicates the future developed plan of the same

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, the major change in the future from the present will be that the

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will be completely renovated into housing with some facilities for the people by completely demolishing industries. Focusing on the present image of the

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, the city centre has a big square which is connected by a road on the south.

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, it is surrounded by around 8 industries with the majority of them located on the eastern side of the

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. Rivers separate the farmland from the

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which is situated in the northern area.

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, there are lots of changes made in the strategy of developing the area.

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, the city square in the centre has one more road and bridge connected to it, with the former going to the dead end in the northwest region and the latter reaching the farmland through it.

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, all the industries are planned to become extinct.

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, the plan for housing for people is generated on both the western and eastern sides.

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, with the enormous increase in housing, facilities like schools, playgrounds, shops and a medical

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are designed for the comfort of people. There is

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the construction of housing near the farmland beyond the bridge.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

227 words

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The maps below show an indutrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future develpoment of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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