The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical apliances and amount of time spent doing in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical apliances and amount of time spent doing in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrates changes in the percentage of families with electrical appliances and the amount of time that went for housework in one country, throughout the period.
Overall
, people started to purchase electrical technologies more,
however
,
hours
of chores declined gradually. ,
Also
rise in the use of technology affected the amount of housework. Starting from 1920, the washing machine was the most popular appliance among refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. Families continued to purchase washing machines and by 1960 share of
this
was 70 per cent, there was a dip in 1980 even though it ended up being slightly over 70% in 2019. In the case of refrigerators, the percentage of these devices increased dramatically and remained steady from 1980 for the following three decades.
Furthermore
, the usage of vacuum cleaners gained a percentage gradually and
also
peaked with 100% of households starting using them in 2000 for the next 19 years. During the same period between 1920-2019, the amount of time for house chores per week declined continually. In 1920, 50
hours
used to be spent per week.
However
, these figures shortened to 20
hours
per week, and eventually, merely 10
hours
became enough in 2019.
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