The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year
The given bar chart illustrates some information about the
number
of employed people by several Use synonyms
job
types (manager, professionals, semi-professionals, Use synonyms
tradespeople
, clerical and labourers) for Use synonyms
males
and Use synonyms
females
in Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
last
year.
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Firstly
, the highest proportion of employed Linking Words
females
in Use synonyms
Australia
was in Use synonyms
the
clerical jobs, almost
1000. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, the Linking Words
male's
Change noun form
male
number
in Use synonyms
this
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job
is Use synonyms
at
almost 900. Followed by the Change preposition
apply
tradespeople
, who Use synonyms
comes
in second place for the Correct subject-verb agreement
come
number
of employed Use synonyms
males
but for Use synonyms
females
, it was the lowest percentage of all, 100. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
Correct article usage
the professionals
professionals
Change the noun form
professional
job
Use synonyms
type
had nearly the same Fix the agreement mistake
types
number
for Use synonyms
males
and Use synonyms
females
in Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
last
year, 650 and 700. Linking Words
Lastly
, Linking Words
male
managers percentage was 600 Correct article usage
the male
as well as
for Linking Words
females
it was 300.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the highest Linking Words
job
type Use synonyms
number
for Use synonyms
males
was in Use synonyms
tradespeople
and clerical, 900. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Furthermore
for employed Add a comma
,Furthermore
females
, the lowest Use synonyms
job
types were in production and Use synonyms
tradespeople
in Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
last
year, at 100.Linking Words
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