The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year

The given bar chart illustrates some information about the

number

of employed people by several

job

types (manager, professionals, semi-professionals,

tradespeople

, clerical and labourers) for

males

and

females

in

Australia

last

year.

Firstly

, the highest proportion of employed

females

in

Australia

was in

the

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clerical jobs, almost 1000.

In addition

, the

male's

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male

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number

in

this

job

is

at

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almost 900. Followed by the

tradespeople

, who

comes

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in second place for the

number

of employed

males

but for

females

, it was the lowest percentage of all, 100.

Moreover

,

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the professionals

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professionals

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professional

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job

type

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types

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had nearly the same

number

for

males

and

females

in

Australia

last

year, 650 and 700.

Lastly

,

male

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the male

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managers percentage was 600

as well as

for

females

it was 300.

Overall

, the highest

job

type

number

for

males

was in

tradespeople

and clerical, 900.

Furthermore

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for employed

females

, the lowest

job

types were in production and

tradespeople

in

Australia

last

year, at 100.