Some country have legal ages at which people can drink. Other counties believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Some

nation

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have

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strict

law

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laws

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to

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regarding

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legal

ages

on the

consump

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consume

of

alcohol

while

other

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others

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believe it is not a good solution. I agree with the former, it is very important to have

a legal

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legal ages

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ages

.

To begin

with, it is important to children or

teenager

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teenagers

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in the crucial period of growth both mentally and physically. If they were allowed to drink without any limitations,

then

it will have

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bad effect on their body. Setting a legal drinking age is the best method to prevent young people from developing

alcohols

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alcohol

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related

problem

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problems

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in later life.

This

may help not only to reduce drinking

,

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but,

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it

also

reduce

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reduces

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to

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alcohol

injuries and death.

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, we can see from the news numerous teenagers

addective

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addictive

to

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the drug

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drug

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drugs

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.

As a result

, they suffer from many harsh

disease

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including hard problems, liver problems etc.

On the other hand

, after passing the legal

ages

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age

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, people can decide their own,

either

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whether

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drinking is good for them or not.

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, in Uk, after passing a child 18 year they can

consump

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consume

the

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alcohol

with their own decision and

this

help

to

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alcohol related

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alcohol-related

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problem in

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socity

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society

wellbing

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wellbeing

. In conclusion, if

government

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the government

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should not

be take

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take

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some strict

law

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laws

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for

drink

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a drink

the drink

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to

alcohol

of any

ages

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age

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, they will damage the future of the country. In my opinion, all

country

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countries

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should set

a legal

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a legal age

legal ages

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ages

for the people when they drink

alcohol

.