The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
The chart below shows us information on the percentage of British
people
giving money to charity by age
range from eighteen
to sixty-five and more for the years 1990 and 2010.
The first thing is that there is a decline in the percentage of people
in groups ages
apply Wrong verb form
aged
eighteen
to fifty, but for groups from fifty-one to sixty-five and, more there is an approximately five per cent
growth in 2010. The percentage of British people
in
ages apply Change preposition
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eighteen
to twenty-five has fallen by ten per cent
, while
in the age
group from twenty-six to thirty-five
a decline is five per Add a comma
,thirty-five
cent
, and for the age
group from thirty-six to fifty a decrease amount for a bit more than five per cent
.
Overall
, people
from older age
groups have more temptation to give money to charity, but at the same time, people
from eighteen
to thirty-five are likely to avoid providing money to charity.Submitted by daniilvasilevski on
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