The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The chart below shows us information on the percentage of British
people
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giving money to charity by
age
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range from
eighteen
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to sixty-five and more for the years 1990 and 2010. The first thing is that there is a decline in the percentage of
people
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in groups
ages
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eighteen
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to fifty, but for groups from fifty-one to sixty-five and, more there is an approximately five per
cent
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growth in 2010. The percentage of British
people
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in
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ages apply
eighteen
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to twenty-five has fallen by ten per
cent
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,
while
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in the
age
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group from twenty-six to
thirty-five
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,thirty-five
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a decline is five per
cent
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, and for the
age
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group from thirty-six to fifty a decrease amount for a bit more than five per
cent
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.
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,
people
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from older
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groups have more temptation to give money to charity, but at the same time,
people
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from
eighteen
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to thirty-five are likely to avoid providing money to charity.
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