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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your e mail describe where you lived when you were a student at the university recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Deniz, I am happy to hear that you have been offered a place on a course at Istanbul Technical
University
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. I had lived there for 5 years.
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 I know almost everywhere neighbour of the
university
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. I lived in Levent which is very close to Ayazaga Campus. You will
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 work there. There are different ways to go the
university
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. You can use public transport.
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, the underground is very close to the campus. Going to school takes 15 minutes.
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 my house had only one room, I was staying with another student. Finding a roommate was easy when I started
university
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 and
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 it was beneficial to reduce payments. If you do not have enough money to live alone, I recommend you live with a friend. Almost all students make mistakes when choosing a location. You will need to wake up early and one or two months later you will not want to spend your time on the roads. You need to consider that point. I explained all I know but If you have any
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 questions you call me or write an email. Take care. İrem
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