Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the development of technology and science, the medical industry has improved. There is an increasing number of

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who choose

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and treatments

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of visiting doctors to solve their health problems.

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this

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may have a lot of benefits, the negative effects it brings should be paid more attention

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Admittedly, trying

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medicines

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and treatments have some positive effects. As

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acknowledged, the payment for visiting a

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is usually high, especially for those

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in poor families who do not have

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medical insurance. In choosing

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medicines

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and

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instead

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of a usual

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, a huge number of money could be saved and used in the more important situation they consider in the future.

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, it is worth noticing that visiting the usual

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has significant meaning in treating

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health problems. Doctors received professional education on how to deal with illness,

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able to choose the most suitable

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and

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for

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, bringing

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back to health in the quickest way.

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, there is the risk that

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may choose

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unsuitable or wrong

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and treatments

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the lack of professional knowledge. Take my personal experience as an example, I used to take some

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directly to deal with the fever I thought. But after taking

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for many days, nothing changed and I had to go to visit my

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. He told me that it was not a simple cold, it was another illness which was very serious and could not be solved by simply taking

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. In conclusion,

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trying

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medicines

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treatment

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can save much money, there is still the need to visit the

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for

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professional advice and

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