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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relation people make?
Has that become a positive or negative development?

#people #technology #relation #development
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There might be contentious debates regarding the issue of whether it is advantageous for a lot of
people
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 to interact with each other by using various technologies. In
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 regard,
people
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 could have a variety of opinions.
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, I strongly believe that
communication
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 with each other using developed technologies has a huge amount of positive influence on societies. I will write
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 essay to elucidate how
technology
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 affects
people
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's
communication
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 and my opinion. In modern
society
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,
technology
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 especially information
technology
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 has been increasingly developed, there are two ways to promote human
communication
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. First of all, the development of the Internet makes
people
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 interact with each other more easily and more frequently, and it allows them to communicate regardless of time and place.
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, the wide use of smartphone
enhance
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 convenience and efficiency in
communication
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 way. In contemporary
society
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, a majority of
people
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 have their smartphones, and they are able to interact with each other by using their phones. I am convinced that
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 phenomenon brings a huge amount of positive effects to human
society
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. the first reason is that modern
people
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 always are busy, so they are unable to meet with their family and friends face to face,
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, thanks to
communication
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technology
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, they can see each other irrespective of time and place. it is a good way to enhance family bonds and friendships.
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, the increase in
communication
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 helps diverse companies create new business models, and it could lead to
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 amount of profit
to
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 the companies. Pondering
on
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the aforementioned statement, it is reasonable to take
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 perspective as the established opinion, and the advantages of
communication
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 technologies should be overlooked. In conclusion,
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 the change in the way
people
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 interact with each other could have some negative influence, I am of
opinion
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 the merits of the advanced
communication
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 method have much more considerable implications for
society
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.
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