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The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process.

The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled. Using information from the flow chart describe the laundry process.
The given flow chart illustrates
process
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the process
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 between
collection
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a collection
the collection
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 of
laundry
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to
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and to
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 transportation folding machine.
Overall
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, there are
the
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apply
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8 main steps to tackle
with
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apply
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laundry
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. Collection, separation, loading, drying, and folding are brief examples
for
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of
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 these steps. First and foremost,
laundry
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 is collected from suppliers in a short time. Collected items
separated
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were separated
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to
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into
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 2 categories; towels and linen. Categorized items are loaded into
laundry
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 bags ,
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moreover
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,moreover
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 the bags are transported into a
laundry
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 machine. The washing phase is completed in 2 hours and followed by the draining phase. Some water is drained by the pressing step, but some laundries will complete
drying
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the drying
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 process later. It is true that towels are dried completely in the pressing step.
In contrast
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, linen is
lefted
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left
lifted
 half-wet. Half-wet linen is ironed, and ready for the folding phase like towels. All items are transported to the folding machine, and the 8 main steps
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are successfuly
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successfuly
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successfully
 finished.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words laundry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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