Two maps show the change of a coastal town, called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007.
The twin map illustrates the modifications that occurred in Pentland, a
town
located by the beach from 1950 to 2007.
It can be observed that in 1950 the sea beach present at the northern part
of the map is in the shape of a half circle. The western part
has car
parking area and the industrial area is present in the western Add an article
a car
part
of the town
. Roads run vertically from the sea to the southern part
of the map dividing the grassland in the south. Grassland is also
present sparely in the north.
However
, by 2007 the town
has gone significant evolution. An
yacht marina is formed by the sea. A park, swimming pool and multiple-storey car parking area came up on the Change the article
A
north western
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northwestern
part
of the town
whereas
apartments were constructed in north eastern
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northeastern
part
along with
shops. A cinema and a group of houses were built in the south western
and Correct your spelling
southwestern
south eastern
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southeastern
part
of the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
town
respectively.
Roads are present vertically however
in the north while
meeting the yacht marina, the roads splitted
along the marina and stayed aligned Correct your spelling
split
to
it.Change preposition
with
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