Two maps show the change of a coastal town, called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007.

Two maps show the change of a coastal town, called Pentland, from 1950 to 2007.
The twin map illustrates the modifications that occurred in Pentland, a
town
located by the beach from 1950 to 2007. It can be observed that in 1950 the sea beach present at the northern
part
of the map is in the shape of a half circle. The western
part
has
car
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parking area and the industrial area is present in the western
part
of the
town
. Roads run vertically from the sea to the southern
part
of the map dividing the grassland in the south. Grassland is
also
present sparely in the north.
However
, by 2007 the
town
has gone significant evolution.
An
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yacht marina is formed by the sea. A park, swimming pool and multiple-storey car parking area came up on the
north western
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part
of the
town
whereas
apartments were constructed in
north eastern
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northeastern
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part
along with
shops. A cinema and a group of houses were built in the
south western
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and
south eastern
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southeastern
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part
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of the
town
respectively. Roads are present vertically
however
in the north
while
meeting the yacht marina, the roads
splitted
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along the marina and stayed aligned
to
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it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, part with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • coastal town
  • layout
  • undeveloped
  • infrastructure
  • landmarks
  • rural
  • significant changes
  • tourist attractions
  • residential areas
  • housing estates
  • tourism-driven economy
  • green spaces
  • beachfront properties
  • coastline
  • environmental sustainability
  • economic growth
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