people often think about creating on ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
In
this
contemporary era, social communities are considered one of the most critical contexts in the world, especially modern communities. As a result
of this
issue, it is argued by some proponents that people must create the ideal societies, but in the majority of cases, it does not occur in real. In this
essay I would mention a few numbers of ways to create an ideal association, that can alleviate the issue ,Correct word choice
but
however
can not solve the problem basically.Add a comma
,however
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite